Saturday, August 30

The Wolf Story

Sorry if there are some grammar problems, I'm working on it!


The Wolf Story
(I am working on the title)
(if you have an ideas tell me!)


I padded up the mountain. There was a reason that I was climbing, a reason that I wanted to keep to myself for the moment. I should be at home in my den, but it didn’t seem so warm anymore. I jumped from one rock to another, the wind and snow hit my nose and eyes, stinging them.


I left my den three suns ago; soon it would to be used by some other animal. I knew that I would never go back to that den. This saddened my thoughts but I kept pushing on, I had to. I slid down the rock and padded though the snow. My paw prints weren’t behind me for very long; they were blown away by the swoosh of the wind as if they weren’t ever there.


I never stopped, there would be no rest for me, and something drove me on. I had to finish this, and then my life could go on. My paws slipped from under me and I fell to the ground. My side and legs cried out in pain as I lifted myself back up. I looked up the mountain, the sun highlighted its point, which pierced the middle of the sun… scarring it for life…for all eternity.


My legs begged me to stop and give them a break, yet I knew that I had to get to the top by the night’s end. I put what ever energy I could in to my legs and pressed on. My tail dragged the ground, it was no longer tall and proud. I was once the leader, the dominate, yet now…I stopped myself from thinking about it. I must prevail, and then I can go home and lie beside my brothers and sisters and be in peace. Until then I must finish the task put before me.


The mountain peak wasn’t getting any bigger yet my muscles grew weaker with every step. Soon my head started to dip for I had no more energy to support it. Yet the task must be done. I thought of my mate and her babies dead, the rest of my pack dead at the feet of those horrid monsters. That seemed to give me the energy to go further.


Her beautiful muzzle lying on its side, the muzzle that had at one time nuzzled me to sleep. The tail that had once wagged for me, now weak and limp. The eyes, oh those gorgeous and stunning golden eyes that had once looked at me with love and compassion now gone from the world forever. Her silver hair was as striking as the moon itself rising and falling with the rhythm of life, was now still. Seeing those beasts hold her up by her hind legs and jeer and shout with the conquest of killing the beauty, made me go on when I thought I couldn’t. Yearning for the love that had once warmed me inside. She was gone and with her, the babies.


The cubs that had played with joy in the den. They only saw the world outside their den them for a minute before they fell. They were healthy and they would have lived to see their first winter. Yet it never happened. My brothers and sisters tried to save them, so the next generation might live to see a new day, yet it never happened. Even my mother died that day, I could still hear her howl in my head.


My family was gathered up and the men went behind them and one of them took out a box that made a flash and then they walked away. They left my whole pack behind, lying side by side. I was the only one to survive. I was hit in the leg and I collapsed and I woke up to see the rest of the happenings.


Afterwards, I when up to each of my fallen comrades and mourned for them. That night was when the first of the snows arrived, and the pup’s fur had its first snow on it. I brought the pack inside their den. I had laid next to my mate for the last time that night as I watched it snow outside. I hoped that she would awake and lick my ears lovingly as she once did and rest her head on my back. I waited all night for that to happen. In the morning I left the den for the last time. The leader of a pack that was no longer in existence.


I carried on up the mountain, but fell again because of the crushing memories of despair that had made their way to my heart. I couldn’t move and I didn’t want too. All I wanted was to slip under a sheet of snow and pass on to another world. To find her again and live with her again. Somewhere where she would never leave me, and so I could be at peace. I could almost see her ahead of me, on the top of the mountain, waiting. Yet she wasn’t there, it must have been the snow. Then again there she was waiting for me, her silky fur blowing in the wind. She looked at me and the howled at the sky. The sound was mournful and beautiful while painful and invigorating.


I hauled myself up even though I could barely stand and I could see her more clearly. Yet her image flickered out of my sight. I took a step and it hurt but I needed her more than the world. The wind seemed to cry out in pain with me as I started to walk my last. I lifted my head and tail and stumbled forward. The snow lashed at me and stung my nose, I didn’t feel it. I just looked at the spot where the silver haired wolf had been.


It no longer mattered what happened to me because as long as I was with her I would be alright. Yet there she was again! Waiting for me at the top of the mountain I now knew why I had come. I whimpered at her as I limped forward. She disappeared as I took another step. She had to be there, she had to be! Ache throbbed in my mind as I climbed the last rock and there she was. Her eyes glinted at me with that special glow, her tail wagged happily and her fur shown red in the sunset. The pain seemed to melt in my mind as I saw her. She was there. I ran up to her, no longer in pain or tired. I had found my peace at last.


I nuzzled her side as she licked my ear lovingly; I took in her wonderful scent, no longer tinged with blood or death, wonderful again. We stood for the longest time just knowing that we were together again. I saw love in those golden eyes and I knew that I would never leave her side again. I closed my eyes just taking in her scent which seemed as sweet as the sweetest flower. When I opened my eyes I saw that I was no longer on a mountain but in the forest that I grew up in, the golden eyed wolf ran into the forest and I followed her into our new life together. I was home.


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Still today on the top of that mountain you can see a rock, the closer you looked you see two wolfs standing side by side looking into the sunrise. They seem at peace to just to stand there for eternity…which they did and still do.


AN: I was inspired to write this story off a picture that I saw on the internet (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/f/f5/Howlsnow.jpg) I had to write about this wolf! So I did, I almost cried two or three times while I wrote this. I hope you enjoy this!


R&R&E! Brightfrost


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What do you think? Sorry it's so long....but I seem to like long things. (A.K.A. 1,345 words)


Here is the picture I was talking about:


Busy/Craziness

Yeah, I know that the last time I posted something was 27, I am very busy and I hardly have time to do what I want to do! (writing has flat lined the last few days)

("OH! The Horror!" someone screams in the background).

Today I am going to have a sleepover with Quietfoot and we're going to stay up late, play games, watch movies and all that fun stuff.

Anyways,

I am going to post my story so everyone can read it before I post it on FF! It might take an hour or so but it will be up shortly

Thanks!

Brightfrost

P.s. We're doing ballet/tap. What's that you ask? I have no clue.

P.S.S. Arty/Majic has gone back! and we are fosterless!

Sunday, August 24

The Top 104 Worst Cliches

So I bought this magazine at the bookstore that had the top 104 Worst Cliches. I thought it was worth a read so I opened to the page in the magazine and 5 minutes later and both Mom and I were cracking up laughing. Here are the ones that cracked me up....

(I had to change a bit of the text for the young people that might be reading this.....)

  • Any machine, sporting equipment, animal, or human that defies gravity.
  • Any description of vomit.
  • Any car that throws a spray of gravel into the air as it exits a driveway
  • Anything that fills the air, especially silence, anticipation or....gravel.
  • Any bright, spunky heroine who is frustrated by dumb boyfriends and prevails...until, one day, she has to be rescued by her father, brother, ex-boyfriend, husband, ex-husband, grandfather or witty gay friend...who's still a bit of a jerk but who is basically a good guy and probably ought to be given another chance anyhow because, as we all know, there just aren't that many great guys out there in the first place.
  • Exclamation marks!-aren't they so cute?! and the show you know how to express your emotions!! Which means they're just right for every scene!!!

And finally ... the A-1, worst, most pathetic creative writing cliche ever:

(Sorry Russetstorm)

  • Personification! of any breeze, storm, body of water, cloud, fog, building, mountain, mist, cloud, swamp, bar, tree, flower, flack, fish, portrait, planet, star, farm animal, city, hamlet, time of day, room, weapon, idem of clothing, food, forest animal or Grecian urn. Such as: The despairing clouds wept tears that splattered my soul with despair. Or: The pursuing wind stopped in its tracks. like a tracker suddenly suspicious of being tracked. Give it a *Peep!* rest!

Or my Mom's

The majestic corn stalks stood
shoulder to shoulder with their "ears" drawn ready to ward off the impending
storm. -Mom or The-Fix-It-Artist

It was too good to pass up!

Brightfrost

This is an except from the article "104 Worst Creative-Writing Cliches", and is rightfully belongs to Randy F. Nelson and "The Writer The Essential Resource For Writers Since 1887". I am just a peaceful nobody who liked parts of the article and put it up for the amusement of others (who are somebodies (like you))

(How is the name "Runningwind"?)

Saturday, August 23

Eragon

As I said before I LOVE dragons, the movie Eragon is one of my favorites. I just watched it last night and I loved everything about it. It makes me want to write some stories about him. I can't though. Not with Spiderman 3/4 of the way done (and at 12,000 words & 33 pages)

I hope to maybe be done with it by the end of the week.
Brightfrost

Thursday, August 21

A Hint (And A Hit) Of What's To Come...

This is part of my story,the funny part. Now my character, Sierra knows what Spiderman's name is and she is looking it up in the phonebook in the phone booth. He is looking for her as she looks up his name (there are reasons that he is looking for her but I can not tell you those reasons). And well, I guess you'll have to find out.



***


After she had closed the door she turned the phone book pages and mumbled: “Peter Parker, Peter Parker, Peter Parker, oh where do you live Mr. Parker?”


At that moment Mr. Peter Parker ripped the door off of the booth and Sierra looked up and said: “Oh that’s where you live.”


He jumped down blocking her way.


Sierra looked around. Now she was trapped in the booth with only a phone book to protect her. It wasn’t looking good. Yet a phonebook could be very effective.



She yelled at him: “I was looking up your name! Why don’t you look it up yourself!?”



Her yelling startled him and then she threw the phonebook at him as hard as she could. It was a point blank shot. It hit him straight in the forehead knocking him out of the way. She brushed past him and dashed into a crowd of people.



***


LOL


Brightfrost

Stories

I am writing a story about Spiderman right now, I can't post it because it has my characters which I am developing for a future book. All I can say is that it has Lizard-men, dragons, and other strange creatures. To anybody that knows me this is right up my alley.

Anyways the Spiderman story is about 8,000 words right now and 20 pages. I am also working on two other stories a sad wolf story and the last chapter in the White Guitar. The Wolf story is in the last faze of editing and the white guitar didn't meet up to my standers.

Thanks for reading...

Brightfrost

Thursday, August 14


Words that weep and tears that speak.

-Cowley, The Prophet

Tuesday, August 12

Who Said HomeSchooling Was Light?

If you didn't know, I home school and this year we have gone with system call "Calvert". The stuff just got here yesterday and boy it'd heavy. When I tried to carried it in and I started to shake and bend over. Mom helped me get the box to the table. I am pretty strong for my age and this should of been a precursor of things to come.

In the box there was 30 different books! I am guessing that it must weigh at least 30 pounds maybe 40. Here is how much a few of my books weigh...

History: 6lb
All Math: 9lb
Language: 4lb
Science: 9lb
All of today's books: 26lb


Here's a picture of all of the books and stuff that went with it:



the books
the ruler shows how much there is...
Oh, and that's not all!
my school books
And these are the books I will be using today!

Yipee for me! Anyways Arty (Majik) got a bath today and now he's sssooo soft!

Thanks for reading my blog!

Brightfrost

Monday, August 11

Russetstorm's Message To The World Of Bloggers!

So I was Iming with my friend Russetstorm and this is what happened....

Brightfrost (not my real user name) is busy: Blogging

Russetstorm: Oh you're Blogging now!

Brighfrost: Yep I am

Russetstorm: kewls like (That's cool)

Brightfrost: LOL I'll im you when it's done

Russetstorm: Yay!

Russetstorm: Will you mention me?

Russetstorm: LOL, Probably not

Brightfrost: Hummm....

Brightfrost: What do you want to say to the world of Bloggers?

Russetstorm: Well, I meant you talking about my stories?

Russetstorm: And how you edit them and how much i LOVE you!

Brightfrost: lol

Russetstorm: wha?

Russetstorm: I do love you!

Brightfrost: Thanks!

Brightfrost: By the way your name is....I'll surprise you!

Brightfrost:I'm back to Bloggin'

Russetstorm: oooooooohhhhhhhh boy!

Russetstorm: yayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayay!

There you go Russetstorm your own part of my blog!


Brighfrost

Oh He's Majik! And my new destop!

I have got a new monitor. Yeah, it hooks up to my laptop so I have the same image on both computers. It's really cool! I got a wireless mouse for it too! Yyyyeeaaahhhh!!!!

There are my two dragons that watch me all day long...the one on the left was found in airport and my Mom & Dad picked him up for me. He's really cool!
And this is this is our new foster puppy! His name is Majik (magic) and he is the cutest thing EVER! His about 6 weeks and he loves to roll in grass!
I'll get better pictures later!
"What's that?" he says

I am the captain of blurry!

"Cute? What's that?"

Saturday, August 9

2 In The Morning

I stayed at Quitefoot's house last night and we stayed up till two in the morning! To some teens that is still early, not to me! We watched a movie and played DS. It was fun. It is also fun when you wake up at 6 and can't go back to sleep! I think I got about 3-4 hours of sleep...yippee!

Now we are going to eat pancakes and do something else....probably Wii.

See yah!
Brightfrost

Thursday, August 7

Yesterday!

Yesterday was crazy! I wanted to show you how crazy they can get...

7:30-wake up
8:35-We picked up Quitefoot my new best friend
9:00-Art camp
12:00-Mom picked me up
12:45- I ate with my other best friend
1:00-study time
3:00-Hanged out with my best friend
5:00-My mom helped out at our Church
6:30-Strength class
7:30-Dad picked me up and he got a hair cut
7:45-We bought some dinner
8:00-home
9:30-crashed into bed

It does look like much but it is....it's like mom said: "When you take nap at 6:30 at night then you know how crazy you day has been."

Nof' said
Brightfrost

Sunday, August 3

Stories

I have some new story up on fanfiction! Yea for Brightfrost! It's kind of a joke but it's still funny. I am also going though the last stages of editing another story about a wolf...that dies. I know, it's not really me but I just had to write this story. Hopefully I'll have it up really, really soon.




Thanks!


Brightfrost




P.s. On Fanfiction you can see how many people view your story and where they come from and right now people from Sweden, Pakistan, Norway, Saudi Arabia, Finland, Germany, Singapore, Malaysia, Ireland Spain, Taiwan, New Zealand Australia and the UK that have read my stories! It's kind of crazy! Yeah...here's is where you can look at my stories if you want....