Reviews on Reviews: The 9th Race

Once again it's that time! Sorry for no other bloggings, been real busy with essay.Since I didn't do it last week I'll put the two together.

Holly Marie Fowl:
Chapter 13: OME i love the part at the end! Teehee.Fantastic job! :D:D:D:D:D~HMF

Agreed! I love that chapter! It was fun to write!

Chpt12: Ice? Or is it a seashell?Great story! (sucks that she got her memory back, though)See you next week!~HMF

Sorry about that! If you are talking about a riddle a few weeks ago then you are right! YES! It really really really sucks! Why? You'll find out!

AyameAkako:
Chpt 13: Great job on this chapter :D Awaiting for your next

I hope you enjoy this one! Thanks!

Chpt 12: HORRAY GREAT JOB Please update again!

;) Will do!

Alwaysbtheir:
Chp 13: funny chapt!update soon!

I update every week (ignoring last week) Thanks for reviewing!

Liris:
Chp 13: Scales.Holly's hair is auburn, which is a shade of red, not brown, but other than that i like. Artemis and Foaly should never be in a room alone with Holly - they'd drive her crazy in minutes. Nice job, and update soon!

Auburn is a kind of brown and red in my book, sorry. I do agree that Foaly and Artemis should never be left in the same room with Holly! This just proves the point! Thanks for reviewing! You got it right! Congrats!

Grimoire Heart:
Chp 13: SCALES~~!x3I love this chappy too~xDSounds like something Arty&Foaly would do, prattling off their geniosities (not a word) like that~~

I think that they would do that for sure! I got what you meant by 'geniostites'!! Right on the riddle

ilex-ferox:

Chp13:The Swiss flag is a white cross on a red ground and the German flag is black, red and yellow.

Sorry! I'll fix that later!

Hazelcloud:
Chp13: Umm..is it a 'scale'? That was a amusing chapter. Especially when they were listing all of the flags!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Sillybookworm:
Chp 12: Hurry up and update!

Don't worry! I did!

That's it folks! See yeah next week!

BF

Swann is MAD

Yeah..well. I am sure some of the people that are reading my blog has read the latest chapter is my story. Again, then if you are said person then, you read the last sentence. Again may I add that you did not realize that I spent a whole hour on that sentence! >.< Yes I really did spend an hour.

I was fighting cliche (of course). I couldn't come up with something that I liked. So I brainstormed...these are the sentences that didn't made the cut.

Base: “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but

1. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but now it’s my turn, and I will be prepared for your little fairy friends.”

2. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but now, I will defeat you.”

3. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but I am going to win this game that you seem to play.”

4. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but in round two, you are going to be the one who is defeated.”

5. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but, now it’s my turn and I will be prepared for you and your little fairy friends.”

6. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but MUAHAHAHAH!” :)

7. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but..but today is round two and I will be playing straight out. No more misses nice.”

8. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but today is different. Today I will have you once again you cursed dragon. And this time I will be prepared for your little fairy friends.” (this is in the story)

9. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but now I’ll get you and reveal you to the world.”

10. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but now I have to go make brownies.”

11. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but today is going to be different. Today I am going to win and you aren’t going to be able to stop me.”

12. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but now I will hunt you down and make you grovel at my feet.”

13. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but now I will hunt you down and make you grovel at my feet, dragon, begging for mercy.”

14. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but now I know about your little fairy friends, and now they won’t be able to help you.”

15. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but now I know your little secret and in round two…I will win.”

16. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but I will not hold any mercy towards you.”

17. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but, now I know your little secret.”

18. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but right now I think I’ll go to the beach.”

19. “You…” she hissed her eyes hot with fire. “You won round one, but in round two I will stand victorious.”

My mind goes to strange places. O.o Much of it is out of character for Swann but I needed to brainstorm.

What's your favorite?

BF

Reviews on Reviews

YAY! Dragon got chapter back to me after a mix up and she edited the wrong chapter that I just cut out of the story.

cullenfan:I'm going out on a limb here for this riddle. Is it eye? That's the only thing I could think of.That was an interesting chapter. I love the name Herodes. I found this name that sorta reminds me of it. Haroe. Hair-row. I think it's awesome.

Thanks! I really like Herodes's name as well! An eye is a good one but it's really...a SHADOW! :D I also really like the name Haroe. It was in the running for being in the poll but there were too many other good names that I liked!

AyameAkako:Wow interesting cant wait to see what happens your new charracter is interesting :D

That's good that there interesting...because your going to see alot of them! I have tried really hard to make them interesting, which was a little tough.

Holly Marie Fowl:The Shadow.Fantastic story!~HMF

Yep, Correct! Thanks! I can't wait 'till the end, it's good...how do I know this? ...well...I JUST FINISHED THE SECOND TO LAST CHAPTER! WOOT! *parties*

jodz92:I'm enjoying this so far (: And is it a shadow? Well done, look forward to more! (:

Yay! A new reviewer! I am glad that you like it so far, as I said last time were just getting into the real plot. The rollercoster is just beginning! (yes, you're right! A shadow!)


Grimoire Heart :shadow~? xDI dunno~ A/H and H/A ~ xD This couple actually intrigues me...so, please continue~?


Don't worry! I'm going to continue! This story will only die (stops) if I die! I don't really think that's going to happen! yep A/H H/A I didn't even realize that until it was all said and done...*sigh* Hero and Amara are very intriguing....very much so...


Rathios: 1 i hope you let my cousin out of that lab 2 u got that riddle out of a book i happen to also own and 3 THIS FIC IS ONE OF THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ!

Okay... 1. You mean Herodes's long lost cousin since the rest are dead? :D He's already out if you have read the latest chapter. 2. Probably, there is a good chance of that. 3. *faints with joy*

Liris An egg! Got that one.Ok, good chapter, and more on the way? Will you yell if I demand more Arty and Holly scenes?Lirisx

*starts screaming and running in circles and hitting head on random walls* just kidding. No it's fine that you demand more Arty and Holly scenes. There is one coming about two weeks away. :) Once the last chapter is done, I'll make the fluff by writing a oneshot.How about that? I can see how you see an egg..but it's a shadow.

That's it from here. The story is 32,000 words with 77 pages and 27 of the 28 chapters. ^-^ Yes I have been busy.
BF

Scaled dragon

For my story that I am working I often have my dragon trampling/walking on/flying near/burning/carrying things. I often have to think if this is possible. So I drew this scaled drawing.

You can probably tell that the white dragon is victim of my doodle. Artemis is used for human and Holly fairy. Yes, you don't have to remind me how bad my humanoids are. I know...*sigh*

(click for bigger image)

Each slash mark is supposedly a foot. I know once or twice I have gone off this scale for dramatics and fun but now I'm pretty loyal to it.

BF

The 9th Race Review on Reviews

Here I go again replying with your reviews....

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and that's it!

*goes off and cries in the corner*

BF

PS: I have stopped writing the story out of sadness...I sorta need to just get going again....*runs off in to pre-made hole and tries to find a way to get started again (fails)*

PSS; *sticks head out of hole* I shouldn't be that selfish and I thank: Fowlfan, Holly Maire Fowl, Midnightwaters, Liris, and Bob115 for motivation that I dearly need! I will try to get started tomorrow and I will blog if I was successful!*disappears*

Stories

I have some new story up on fanfiction! Yea for Brightfrost! It's kind of a joke but it's still funny. I am also going though the last stages of editing another story about a wolf...that dies. I know, it's not really me but I just had to write this story. Hopefully I'll have it up really, really soon.

Thanks!

Brightfrost

P.s. On Fanfiction you can see how many people view your story and where they come from and right now people from Sweden, Pakistan, Norway, Saudi Arabia, Finland, Germany, Singapore, Malaysia, Ireland Spain, Taiwan, New Zealand Australia and the UK that have read my stories! It's kind of crazy! Yeah...here's is where you can look at my stories if you want....

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1636897/

Chapter

Just to tell you I am working on ANOTHER chapter in The White Guitar...yeah, and I have a funny little piece on the way as well...

See yah!

Brightfrost

Eoin Colfer!

The New Book

My Books

The sign for where Eoin Colfer will sign (pun, pun)

The left side of the bus

More pictures of the left side

The back of the bus

The right side of the bus

Eoin Colfer signing a book
Eoin Colfer signing this girl's book
Signing...

That's all the pictures that I got to take...my friend that I met at the signing gave me a paper with her email on it which I lost...:( Sorry!

FANFICTION!!!!!

I have an account on Fanfiction! Fanfiction is a site were I can publish stories with other author's characters with out being hunted down for taking his/her characters. I have just published one of my first stories. It is called The White Guitar. I think it is cool...I hope that you enjoy it:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~brightfrost

See yah!

Brightfrost!

The Time PARADOX!

I finished the new book in under a day and a half! It was ssssoooo good! At the end I was going around and around in circles! And when I came to the last page I went huh? It took me a minute to stop circling and figure out what happened! It is the best book in the series! Even though Eoin said this was going to be the last book, I don't think it will be. It is like saying that it will never rain, it will happen sometime or another.


I am going to have to reread it!

Brightfrost

Here's a picture of it!

The Best Book in The World!

Artemis Fowl Craziness!

Sorry the last few days were a great big blur. So I forgot to post this or have the time to write it. So now I am making myself write it before I have to go. I try to keep posts short but this...not so much.


After getting in the car we started on our way, I was as my mom called me The Co-pilot because I helped her alot with maps. Since mom hasn't read any of the books we listened to the first one on tape so she would have a better idea of what in the world Colfer would be talking about. We stopped a few times for food and gas but besides that it was very boring to write about.


After the hubbub of getting off the highway we saw it, the bright neon green bus (see pictures at the end). It was really cool, it had all the main characters on it and it had the new book on it and it was just really, really cool. As we drove Mom by, and mom waved and the person driving the bus waved back, it was quite funny. After getting the book and the ticket to get the books (I got 3, one for me, one to borrow out and the last one for my friend who couldn't make it)



We drove to our room after that and dumped all our stuff off we then flopped down on the very nice bed and chilled for a few minutes. Then we parked near the theater that we were going to meet Eoin Colfer at and walked to dinner. Dinner was at a very calm restaurant, they gave us water and we settled down until we wanted to go in line to get in. Then they give us the order paper, we didn't see anything that we knew, it was crazy. It was a raw food restaurant. I got a crazy hot sunflower seeds taco and mom had something orangish...I forget what it was call, but on the good side I meet someone who was also an Artemis Fowl fan so we talked and enjoyed the new story. We then went to search out the van which we found and took pictures of (see bellow) it. We then ran and got it line to get in, we, Joyflower (that is what I will call her) and I of course read in line.


Finding seats and settling down was easy and we waited the hour for the show to start. Disney was blasting music in our ears, it wasn't that fun because we were trying to read, the only good thing about the whole thing was that Mom did a hula hoop competition, it was fun and funny. The after a long wait EOIN COLFER walked though the door! And gas shot though a box and it was all cool! Then he talked and we all laughed, for a whole hour, he told so many funny stories and he was really cool and...and short!


I can't tell you any of the stories because if you see him I wouldn't want you to know anything of what he said. After the show I got in line and he signed my books and then I said the lamest thing ever! I said: "I read your books and I started writing." That was so dumb! Anyways after that we crashed on our beds and slept. It the morning I read, in the car I read, while mom shopped I read and read! and read! It was crazy but it was so good! It is the best in the series!


well, that's my adventure with Eoin Colfer...

See yah!

BrightFrost!

I am very sorry but my camera is not working so I can not show you the pictures. I will have them to you ASAP. Thanks!